tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1384890026180269644.post1285621692572003911..comments2008-02-29T00:45:34.170-08:00Annahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04660551089821141019noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1384890026180269644.post-23186960444697189412008-02-28T23:43:00.000-08:002008-02-28T23:43:00.000-08:00I don't fink I wike you, Mishter Anonymush. You make Miss Anna cwy and frow things because you upseddith her too mutch. <BR/><BR/>I fink your poem rockths, tho! \o/<BR/><BR/><BR/>;>jlAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1384890026180269644.post-77037804622953582862008-02-08T17:26:00.000-08:002008-02-08T17:26:00.000-08:00I'm sorry honey,<BR/>I caught my plane.<BR/>I had to go,<BR/>though I'm to blame.<BR/>I did it all for you my dear<BR/>but in my heart and soul you're here.<BR/>but I'll be back as soon I can<BR/>and then I'll say 'tis here I am.<BR/>a crushing hug and warm embrace<BR/>and once again a smiling face. <BR/>So hush now honey don't dispair.<BR/>because for you i'm always there.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1384890026180269644.post-31442929762215499572008-02-07T22:33:00.000-08:002008-02-07T22:33:00.000-08:00Oh this is wonderfully done, written in a fragile, vulnerable voice and excellent images:<BR/><BR/>"I'm breaking glass <BR/>inside my head"<BR/><BR/>and the last 2 killer lines. Very powerful word choices, Anna..:) Kudos!janetleighnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1384890026180269644.post-59292355537553950302008-02-07T19:12:00.000-08:002008-02-07T19:12:00.000-08:00Anna, <BR/><BR/>please remove http://www.why-paisley.com/justpaisley/<BR/><BR/>from your I promise blogroll.<BR/><BR/>You can still visit him weekly, of course, if you want. And ask him to stick to visiting you. But he has joined a new list, because it needed a member and he was an extra one on ours.<BR/><BR/>Thanks!writerwomanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07645753712657412094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1384890026180269644.post-35363588181817492572008-02-07T12:37:00.000-08:002008-02-07T12:37:00.000-08:00i have so been there,,, exactly there... i know because you described it like you have been there too.......paisleyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1384890026180269644.post-30559099064754348532008-02-07T12:28:00.000-08:002008-02-07T12:28:00.000-08:00Yes:<BR/><BR/><I>I'm breaking glass<BR/>inside my head.</I><BR/><BR/>followed by<BR/><BR/><I>If I throw enough jars<BR/>Around my room<BR/>And crash them into<BR/>Shards and hell </I><BR/><BR/>Makes for very gripping, uncomfortable reading. Very raw. This poem has a lot of emotional impact. <BR/><BR/>I'm glad you put something up again that is yours, Anna :)<BR/><BR/>Arioscribblingsandsketcheshttp://scribblingsandsketches.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1384890026180269644.post-4173245454208944802008-02-07T06:20:00.000-08:002008-02-07T06:20:00.000-08:00I'm breaking glass<BR/>Inside my head.<BR/><BR/><BR/>fantastic line! The sadness and desperation in this poem is gripping.writerwomanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07645753712657412094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1384890026180269644.post-32823730467028714642008-02-06T16:30:00.000-08:002008-02-06T16:30:00.000-08:00Wow!noahthegreathttp://noahthegreat.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.com